Wednesday, March 4, 2009

Midterm Paper Blog 6

This paper was a challenge and I am happy to be finished, and feel good about what I have put together.

To start I created a thesis and introduction, then talked with you about my ideas, in which you gave me a very helpful outline of a better way to organize my ideas. I then used this structure to work through each moment, and assemble my argument. I think I did a good job of putting together facts, ideas, and experiences to get my point across.

I think I did a great job putting it all together, and there can always be a better way to explain, but within the circumstances I did the best I could do.

Thank you for helping with an outline, and I look forward to knowing how I did, and I hope my ideas and thoughts come together how I see them.

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